Project 2 Storyboard Feedback Response

Before hearing anybody else's opinion, I was quite torn between the two ideas I had for my concept. However, after the getting some feedback, I've decided that the objects in my idea would play a more important role in making my film more universal. It's also got me considering using my personal experience with divorced parents to change the narrative a bit to reflect my own on-hand interpretation of the degradation of a relationship. It's a bit troubling to think about, as I don't really want to think about it, but it would make for a more convincing, powerful piece. The feedback was a great help and gave me a solid idea of where I will take everything, especially since my initial ideas were loose on decisions.