Project III Feedback - 11.10.2014

I was told to make my project more first-person, as in shuffling and bumping into people in a crowd.  I really think this will make my project more dynamic.  My conversation now in my project seems to scripted.  I need to fix it so that it seems more natural.  To achieve it, I will probably add in conversational audio spoken by myself.  I'm really excited to get this project started.