Project 3 Critique Reflection

I think that the sounds layering, ambient breathing sounds, and the flow of words were successful and well conveyed. I am glad the piece came off as meditative and easy to listen to for such a heavy concept. I would like to incorporate more of my speech as well to give more of a conversation feel. I think the aspect of playfulness about the subject was conveyed to an extent, but I think that I can push it further. I love the idea of using the sound as an installation soundtrack.