crit 3

I thought that it went alright. I enjoyed experimenting with sound and playing with the idea of attraction and repulsion. However, I think the critique of it being not quite enough to induce a real visceral reaction was on point. I thought it was interesting how the word rape was brought up; I hadn't thought of that when I created the piece. Also I think that the project would certainly benefit from some kind of concluding noise at the end of the piece rather than a uneventful fading out.