I believe my critique
went very well; I got great feedback and suggestions from my peers after they
watched the animation. I was told my plot was clear and easy to follow. I liked
how one person commented about my fairy's physical form not being the cliché,
Disney-like type. It had its own personalty and style that wasn't stereotypically girly. My animation also was liked for its smooth frames. I need to
go back and rework some details in the animation. I want to take out one Ken
Burns, like my peers suggested, and clean up a couple of frames that were messy.
I also need to make the scene with the fairy and house have more depth. I am really excited for Art Bash. I can't wait to be able to share my animation with the community. I'm happy to have been able to create an animation that was received well.
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